Can someone correct my essay?

Firstly, you need an introduction instead of starting your essay off with, "Because..." Something similar to, "Revenge is nothing shy of ignorance, whether it be over a troubled past, an ex lover, or a stolen item, no matter what the case there is no right reason (logically or ethically) to take revenge on someone or something, for that matter...." This is not a perfect introduction, at all. But if you wouldn't mind sending me your full essay I could definitely help you with proper spelling, similes, and punctuation.