A poem of mine? Comments? Critiques?

Personally, I think this rambles nicely...like thoughts of missed old friends are wont t'do...without fallin' off the edge of the porch in the process! ;-) I like it...and often wonder m'self, since I've seen so many out here in "new coats", how many are actually gone and how many are still here and we just don't always know! LOL